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PostSubject: School Love Story   School Love Story I_icon_minitimeSat Oct 23, 2010 7:45 am

Chapter One

As he set his eyes on her, she took a quick glance at him. She had beautiful deep brown hair and a cute laugh followed by a pretty smile. He had a crush on her since he first laid eyes on her gorgeous face. They had gone to school together for so long, but to him it seemed as if she was growing farther and farther apart from him. All he wanted was to be loved back by her once again, and to feel the warmth of her gentle hugs. He wasn't sure if she felt the same as he did, and he wanted to know.


Chapter Two

Whenever they talked, he felt like he was noticed, and safe. Her sweet voice sounded like an angel's whisper in his ear. She and him were both very artistically imaginative. The way he drew was different than her way, and he wanted to be as good as her. They were both naturally gifted.When someone bigger than him made fun of her, he felt compelled to do something about it, but was too afraid of it coming back at him. He cared for her.


Chapter Three

He made some mistakes that put a distance between them, which he wishes he didn't make. He never meant to hurt her feelings, nor to make her upset. He made those mistakes because he thought he was deceived, or betrayed. He took it all wrong and it came to an end. He might have pretened to like other girls, to the extent of asking them out, but he was doing all of that to fill the hole that the girl left in his heart. He was lonely.


Chapter Four

He hated being alone. It just made him feel down, even when he didn't show it. Not to mention being made fun of. All of this weight on his shoulders was piling up. When he told her that he cared about her, she thought it was sweet of him. That made him feel happy. To know that someone cared about what he said, made him happy.

Do not stereotype this guy as "obsessive" or "stalker". He is simply inlove.
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PostSubject: Re: School Love Story   School Love Story I_icon_minitimeSat Oct 23, 2010 7:51 am

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I like this. Smile

Look at you, being all romantic.

Chapter 3 = story of my life.
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PostSubject: Re: School Love Story   School Love Story I_icon_minitimeSat Oct 23, 2010 8:07 am

Aha yeah and I made this for a girl I liked.
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PostSubject: Re: School Love Story   School Love Story I_icon_minitimeSat Oct 23, 2010 9:24 am

Pretty good
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PostSubject: Re: School Love Story   School Love Story I_icon_minitimeSat Oct 23, 2010 11:02 am

Where's Chapter 5?
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PostSubject: Re: School Love Story   School Love Story I_icon_minitimeSat Oct 23, 2010 11:12 am

thats actually really good
chapter 4 is the story of my life, however, just not the last section of the passage
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PostSubject: Re: School Love Story   School Love Story I_icon_minitimeSat Oct 23, 2010 11:32 am

evoL wrote:
Where's Chapter 5?

Iunno lol
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PostSubject: Re: School Love Story   School Love Story I_icon_minitimeSat Oct 23, 2010 11:38 am

Ask her out?
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PostSubject: Re: School Love Story   School Love Story I_icon_minitimeSat Oct 23, 2010 11:44 am

It was a while ago man..
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PostSubject: Re: School Love Story   School Love Story I_icon_minitimeSat Oct 23, 2010 7:48 pm

Oh ok.....

Completely missed opportunity.
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PostSubject: Re: School Love Story   School Love Story I_icon_minitimeSat Oct 23, 2010 9:27 pm

well its ok righting but some parts are a bit awkward like
"gorgeous face"
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PostSubject: Re: School Love Story   School Love Story I_icon_minitimeSat Oct 23, 2010 9:35 pm

that story was disapointing
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PostSubject: Re: School Love Story   School Love Story I_icon_minitimeMon Oct 25, 2010 7:26 am

That's so sweet. <3
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PostSubject: Re: School Love Story   School Love Story I_icon_minitimeMon Oct 25, 2010 8:34 am

tek this the nice side of you bro? Razz nice story
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