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+4epicfail888 DoCuMENTation Andy tektek 8 posters |
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tektek That's what she said
Posts : 541 Points : 5746 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2010-07-01 Location : Canada
| Subject: School Love Story Sat Oct 23, 2010 7:45 am | |
| Chapter One
As he set his eyes on her, she took a quick glance at him. She had beautiful deep brown hair and a cute laugh followed by a pretty smile. He had a crush on her since he first laid eyes on her gorgeous face. They had gone to school together for so long, but to him it seemed as if she was growing farther and farther apart from him. All he wanted was to be loved back by her once again, and to feel the warmth of her gentle hugs. He wasn't sure if she felt the same as he did, and he wanted to know.
Chapter Two
Whenever they talked, he felt like he was noticed, and safe. Her sweet voice sounded like an angel's whisper in his ear. She and him were both very artistically imaginative. The way he drew was different than her way, and he wanted to be as good as her. They were both naturally gifted.When someone bigger than him made fun of her, he felt compelled to do something about it, but was too afraid of it coming back at him. He cared for her.
Chapter Three
He made some mistakes that put a distance between them, which he wishes he didn't make. He never meant to hurt her feelings, nor to make her upset. He made those mistakes because he thought he was deceived, or betrayed. He took it all wrong and it came to an end. He might have pretened to like other girls, to the extent of asking them out, but he was doing all of that to fill the hole that the girl left in his heart. He was lonely.
Chapter Four
He hated being alone. It just made him feel down, even when he didn't show it. Not to mention being made fun of. All of this weight on his shoulders was piling up. When he told her that he cared about her, she thought it was sweet of him. That made him feel happy. To know that someone cared about what he said, made him happy.
Do not stereotype this guy as "obsessive" or "stalker". He is simply inlove. | |
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Andy
Posts : 558 Points : 5635 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2010-08-18 Age : 30 Location : North Carolina
| Subject: Re: School Love Story Sat Oct 23, 2010 7:51 am | |
| I like this. Look at you, being all romantic. Chapter 3 = story of my life. | |
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tektek That's what she said
Posts : 541 Points : 5746 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2010-07-01 Location : Canada
| Subject: Re: School Love Story Sat Oct 23, 2010 8:07 am | |
| Aha yeah and I made this for a girl I liked. | |
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DoCuMENTation lol hes asian
Posts : 819 Points : 5903 Reputation : -2 Join date : 2010-06-18 Age : 26 Location : Who cares. Its the internet
| Subject: Re: School Love Story Sat Oct 23, 2010 9:24 am | |
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Andy
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| Subject: Re: School Love Story Sat Oct 23, 2010 11:02 am | |
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epicfail888 EWW Member
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| Subject: Re: School Love Story Sat Oct 23, 2010 11:12 am | |
| thats actually really good chapter 4 is the story of my life, however, just not the last section of the passage | |
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tektek That's what she said
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| Subject: Re: School Love Story Sat Oct 23, 2010 11:32 am | |
| - evoL wrote:
- Where's Chapter 5?
Iunno lol | |
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Andy
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| Subject: Re: School Love Story Sat Oct 23, 2010 11:38 am | |
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tektek That's what she said
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| Subject: Re: School Love Story Sat Oct 23, 2010 11:44 am | |
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Andy
Posts : 558 Points : 5635 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2010-08-18 Age : 30 Location : North Carolina
| Subject: Re: School Love Story Sat Oct 23, 2010 7:48 pm | |
| Oh ok.....
Completely missed opportunity. | |
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Red
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| Subject: Re: School Love Story Sat Oct 23, 2010 9:27 pm | |
| well its ok righting but some parts are a bit awkward like "gorgeous face" | |
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Henry I'm Asian
Posts : 1176 Points : 6086 Reputation : -3 Join date : 2010-07-04 Age : 25 Location : India
| Subject: Re: School Love Story Sat Oct 23, 2010 9:35 pm | |
| that story was disapointing | |
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PuritY
Posts : 1468 Points : 6253 Reputation : 8 Join date : 2010-06-18 Age : 28 Location : I changed this so new people won't know. :D
| Subject: Re: School Love Story Mon Oct 25, 2010 7:26 am | |
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Timzown
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| Subject: Re: School Love Story Mon Oct 25, 2010 8:34 am | |
| tek this the nice side of you bro? nice story | |
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