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JohnCena
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 |  Subject: 8 Bar Freestyle  Thu Sep 09, 2010 5:02 am | |
| I had a whole free period in class and I was bored...so I actually wrote a rap, once the bell rang I just stopped. So I'll say what I got for now.
I see all destruction as everything turns onto corruption
Dodging through the shots when i spark to an eruption
Then went to the occasion, known to be the one man association
With the determination to make my legacy reservation
All my abilities bring all the probabilities
That the chances of beating me, there are no possibilities
I've been through the hardest wars that no one plays me anymore
The past was before, the future I will soar
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Red
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| | Subject: Re: 8 Bar Freestyle Thu Sep 09, 2010 5:13 am | |
| You rhymed
Probobilitys with
Probobilitys
That's the only annoying thing I see
I don't even like rap but I even thought it was good | |
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JohnCena
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| | Subject: Re: 8 Bar Freestyle Thu Sep 09, 2010 5:15 am | |
| - Vegeta wrote:
- You rhymed
Probobilitys with
Probobilitys
That's the only annoying thing I see
I don't even like rap but I even thought it was good It's possibilities and probabilities, lol. and thanks. | |
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Red
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| | Subject: Re: 8 Bar Freestyle Thu Sep 09, 2010 5:20 am | |
| Oh didn't yea it right ( it hard to read on a iPod)
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Henry
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| | Subject: Re: 8 Bar Freestyle Thu Sep 09, 2010 5:29 am | |
| how is it freestyle if u wrote it. U have to rap it no thinking about it just randomly. | |
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JohnCena
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| | Subject: Re: 8 Bar Freestyle Thu Sep 09, 2010 6:05 am | |
| - MexicanCondoms wrote:
- how is it freestyle if u wrote it. U have to rap it no thinking about it just randomly.
freestyle writing...basically  | |
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DoCuMENTation
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| | Subject: Re: 8 Bar Freestyle Thu Sep 09, 2010 6:15 am | |
| I like it.
Its fresh, dawg.
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Henry
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| | Subject: Re: 8 Bar Freestyle Thu Sep 09, 2010 6:38 am | |
| - TDCHAMPION wrote:
- MexicanCondoms wrote:
- how is it freestyle if u wrote it. U have to rap it no thinking about it just randomly.
freestyle writing...basically No such thing. | |
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JohnCena
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Blackie
| | Subject: Re: 8 Bar Freestyle Thu Sep 09, 2010 6:52 am | |
| Jc stop trying to be black and do your homework WOMAN! | |
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Henry
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